- a mother is seen showing favoritism to one of her sons but not the other.
- she is distracted by a news report, the neglected son attempts to ask her why she prefers the other child, she does not answer.
- the boy keeps trying to get her attention. the mother is pre-occupied with staring at a news report on the TV.
- the news report shows a flash back or a girl being raped by her uncle (not actually showing the rape) loses her faith.
- the mother finally comes round and tells the son what happened and gives him a crucifix, showing she has forgiven what has happened.
- we then had an alternative ending; instead of the mother giving the son the crucifix he places it around her neck, then with cleverly selected editing we show the son does nt exist, she aborted the child at a young age.
There are still gaps in the idea which need improving, this is just the basis of our film, we will adapt and improve it further in our next discussion.